WALT- Generate and organised ideas, words, sentences, spelling and editing.
As I( Dwayne Johnson) was on the beach I was showing the pretty girls my big arms, And then this humongous shark came out of the blue, and put my head that I was showing the girls. As I got to the hospital, The doctor had a another arm for me and then I said “ Hurry up before I die!!!” the doctors ran as fast has he could and put the on Dwayne Johnson. A few hours later, Dwayne got his robot arm on.
Good work Presley It's good that you tried your best to write your story and I like your story.
ReplyDeletegod job presley i like your shout story and keep trying.
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